ah, she...

[machinery]

cruel dreams
and tiny tears
pave you under what
she meant to you.

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[Pixelina]

ouch, this is so short but it does get to me

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[machinery]

i really didn't know about this one...i tried making it into a haiku........but.....it didn't happen......but i am glad you liked it...now that I think about it...I do write about "her" a lot...but that's ok I guess...because it was quite a big matter (word choice could be better)....but i am not looking for word choice right now...am I? no I am not..hehehhe

but thank you......

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[Soiled Soul]

i am with lindsay on this one. short simple and bam. i really liked this one even wrote it in my notebook. your write word choice is a little off but it leaves it open for multiple inturpetations


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